Charlie II

Absolutely fantastic. Pure brilliance. It either puts you off writing, when you see that sort of talent, or redoubles your efforts. Wow. Parts were sad, parts were funny, parts were ...

*grins maliciously* Looks like we have a volunteer! Is this all ok, Hunter? Or has anyone else any objections? DarkLight

*rubs hands* Unless, someone was ready for their character to be killed off :D ! Or we could have a newly introduced group of civillians to get shot? Or we ...

*sounds the Derrik trumpet* Yeah, my character's still here and already joined up with group. I reckon Dave (written by Siegfried who's away at camp) is still with us and ...

Wow. Kylan's crit. Completely worth the points. Now I see why you guys want paying for it! That's one decent critique. DarkLight

:( Ah, did you read any of the above posts? Did you? I'd recommend doing that before coming to a conclusion. You might learn something. DarkLight

I've read them. I wouldn't give them 10/10. Nice books, but depressingly predictable is the most recent one I've read: 'Freeglader' . Nice to read, but still a kids book ...

I don't think another 'line by line' would help here. So! Here comes an overview! Droning I do this a lot :( . Describe, don't drone. I think this is ...

Yum! The Salmon of Doubt by Douglas Adams. A brilliant author! I'm enjoying it so far. DarkLight

'How do you feel about the concept of "Gay Pride"?' I think it's right for people to be proud of who they are. We live in a world with such ...

*finishes trawling* And now I see! *wipes brow* Good luck with this guys, you look as if you've got some tough competition! Even so, I see good critiquers amongst you! ...

*sticks out tongue* I still stick with the rest of my argument. Ok, the constant use of 'we'. I get it's more than one person but I don't get why. ...

Interesting: 10 points will get you a low quality critique . Err, I'd change that. I can understand what you're saying but no-one should ever give a 'low quality' critique. ...

Basically, the joint forces of the three races are reeling in the aftermath of the ambush. Some people have escaped without injury, and other's haven't been so lucky. Anyone who's ...

Lyaim Murmured mumblings hung in the air. The bustle amongst the battleground was eerily quiet and Lyaim didn’t care much for the deathly silence. Now and then, the clipped military ...